Spiderman The great rescuer


hi i am a student from wigram primary school. this week we are making our own narrative. our main character on this story is Spiderman. here is my narrative story. is you want to give suggestions or comment feel free.

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  1. hi joshvaari
    i like the way you wrote on the bright sunday morning because then i know it's morning time at sunday.
    ive also learnt that at wigram primary school too in RURU.
    what does the secret jail look like?

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  3. hi naomi,
    i noticed that you have spelt my name wrong it is actually joshvaasri.
    thank you for comment on mine.
    it looks like a palace covered with lots of people in the jail.

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